Julia- Your journal offers a wonderful collection of poems, reflections, and short story. I really enjoyed your poems which harbor back to Byron and Shelby(i believe that's what he wrote- illegible script!)You may want to present these to the literary magazine at WCC.
I hope you continue to write your journal entres: don't stop being an optimist!
A+ (motha fucka!)
I feel like a loser getting such pleasure in recognition from a teacher. Has to do with family issues most like but whatever. I was very touched by what he wrote in the last line, for it indeed means he read all my journal entries. In journal entry #23 I discuss my disapointment in what life has to offer so far, and how dispite all this I try to remain an optimist. Its nice to know that someone actually gives a crap. I wish I had read his note to me before the semester ended so I could tell him how much I appreciated that he actually read my works.
A poem from lord Byron
HE walks                       in beauty, like the night                       - Of cloudless climes and starry skies;
 - And all that's best of dark and bright
 - Meet in her aspect and her eyes:
 - Thus mellow'd to that tender light
 - Which heaven to gaudy day denies.
 - One shade the more, one ray the less,
 - Had half impair'd the nameless grace
 - Which waves in every raven tress,
 - Or softly lightens o'er her face;
 - Where thoughts serenely sweet express
 - How pure, how dear their dwelling-place.
 - And on that cheek, and o'er that brow,
 - So soft, so calm, yet eloquent,
 - The smiles that win, the tints that glow,
 - But tell of days in goodness spent,
 - A mind at peace with all below,
 - A heart whose love is innocent!
 
I like the poem and congrats on the A+
ReplyDeleteits a poem by lord byron not me! one of the most famous poems of the 19th century arielle learn your stuff
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